Drill 23 ยท Reading & Writing ยท Hard Rhetorical Synthesis
SAT Reading & Writing: Hard Rhetorical Synthesis (Drill 23) is a Reading & Writing practice drill covering Hard Rhetorical Synthesis. It contains 5 original questions created by Brian Stewart, a Barron's test prep author with over 20 years of tutoring experience.
Hard Rhetorical Synthesis questions present a set of research notes and a specific writing goal, then ask you to choose the sentence that best accomplishes that goal using only the notes. The wrong answers are usually accurate statements that serve a different purpose than the one asked for, or that subtly misstate the notes. Match the rhetorical task exactly.
Question 1. The student wants to present the main finding of the 2015 study on how chameleons change color. Which choice most effectively uses relevant information from the notes to accomplish this goal?
Explanation: Choice A is the best answer. The sentence reports the study's central finding, color change by tuning crystal spacing, with the direction of the effect, which is the finding the goal wants. Choice B describes the crystal lattice but states no finding about how color changes. Choice C gives the secondary infrared result, a real but lesser point rather than the main finding. Choice D explains the blue end of the effect in detail, leaving out the shift toward red and so reporting half the finding.
Question 2. The student wants to convey how letterpress and lithography differ in placing ink on the page. Which choice most effectively uses relevant information from the notes to accomplish this goal?
Explanation: Choice C is the best answer. The sentence contrasts the raised, directly pressed type of letterpress with lithography's flat, grease-and-water chemistry, drawing the core contrast in how each lays down ink. Choice A notes only that both are printing methods, the shared category rather than the difference. Choice B explains how a lithographic plate works in detail but never contrasts it with letterpress, describing one side alone. Choice D compares the marks each leaves in the paper, a true side effect rather than the difference in how ink is placed.
Question 3. The student wants to define what felt is for readers who have not encountered the term. Which choice most effectively uses relevant information from the notes to accomplish this goal?
Explanation: Choice B is the best answer. The sentence states plainly what felt is and how matting sets it apart from woven or knitted cloth, the definition the task asks for. Choice A describes the one-way movement of the scales in detail, a mechanism rather than a definition of the fabric. Choice C explains why wool mats readily, accounting for a property without defining felt itself. Choice D notes felt's age, a historical aside that says nothing about what felt is.
Question 4. The student wants to introduce the igloo to readers and explain how its dome stays up. Which choice most effectively uses relevant information from the notes to accomplish this goal?
Explanation: Choice D is the best answer. The sentence introduces the snow-block dome and explains the inward-leaning spiral that makes it self-supporting, meeting both halves of the goal. Choice A covers the snow's insulation and the entry tunnel, useful but unrelated to how the dome holds itself up. Choice B identifies the igloo as a snow-block dome but stops before explaining why it stands, satisfying only the first half. Choice C notes how warm the interior can get, an effect of the shelter rather than an account of its structure.
Question 5. The student wants to begin a narrative with a scene of the Inca accountant at work. Which choice most effectively uses relevant information from the notes to accomplish this goal?
Explanation: Choice A is the best answer. The sentence opens with the accountant in a specific moment, fingers on the cords before the inspector comes, the concrete scene the task asks for. Choice B defines the quipu in general terms, exposition rather than a scene. Choice C explains in detail how knots encode data, an informational note with no character or moment. Choice D describes what color and branching mean, again background rather than an opening scene.