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AP English Language — Rhetorical Situation — Writing Drill 1

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AP English Language — Rhetorical Situation — Writing Drill 1 is a Writing practice drill covering Rhetorical Situation — Writing. It contains 5 original questions created by Brian Stewart, a Barron's test prep author with over 20 years of tutoring experience.

Writing drills ask you to 'read like a writer' — analyzing a student draft and choosing revisions that improve its effectiveness. Questions focus on how well the writing addresses its audience, purpose, and rhetorical situation.

Passage

The following is a draft of a student essay written for a local community newsletter audience — adults considering whether to support a ballot measure to increase library funding. [1] Public libraries are important community resources that many people rely on every day. [2] They provide free access to books, computers, and other materials for everyone, regardless of income. [3] Libraries also offer programs for children and adults, including literacy classes, job search assistance, and early childhood reading groups. [4] In recent years, many libraries have expanded their services to include things like seed libraries, tool-lending programs, and spaces for community meetings. [5] Some people wonder whether libraries are still relevant in the digital age, since so much information is available online for free. [6] However, not everyone has reliable internet access at home. [7] Libraries serve as an equalizer, providing internet and technology access to people who otherwise could not afford it. [8] This is especially important for job seekers, students, and small business owners. [9] Libraries are also important for democracy. [10] They provide access to information without political or commercial bias. [11] Librarians are trained to help people find accurate, reliable sources. [12] In a time of widespread misinformation, this kind of guidance is more valuable than ever. [13] For all these reasons, the community should vote yes on the library funding measure. [14] Libraries do a lot of good and deserve our support.

Questions in This Drill

  1. The writer wants to make the opening of the essay more compelling for an audience of community voters. Which revision of sentence 1 best accomplishes this goal?
  2. The writer wants to strengthen the transition between paragraph 2 and paragraph 3. Which sentence, if added at the beginning of paragraph 3, best accomplishes this goal?
  3. The writer wants to add a specific piece of evidence to support the claim in sentence 10 that libraries 'provide access to information without political or commercial bias.' Which addition best supports this claim?
  4. The writer wants to revise sentences 13 and 14 to create a stronger, more specific conclusion. Which revision best accomplishes this goal?
  5. A classmate suggests that the essay would be more persuasive if it acknowledged and responded to the strongest version of the opposing argument. Which addition best accomplishes this?