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About This Drill
AP English Language — Rhetorical Situation — Writing Drill 1 is a Writing practice drill covering Rhetorical Situation — Writing. It contains 5 original questions created by Brian Stewart, a Barron's test prep author with over 20 years of tutoring experience.
Writing drills ask you to 'read like a writer' — analyzing a student draft and choosing revisions that improve its effectiveness. Questions focus on how well the writing addresses its audience, purpose, and rhetorical situation.
Passage
The following is a draft of a student essay written for a local community newsletter audience — adults considering whether to support a ballot measure to increase library funding.
[1] Public libraries are important community resources that many people rely on every day. [2] They provide free access to books, computers, and other materials for everyone, regardless of income. [3] Libraries also offer programs for children and adults, including literacy classes, job search assistance, and early childhood reading groups. [4] In recent years, many libraries have expanded their services to include things like seed libraries, tool-lending programs, and spaces for community meetings.
[5] Some people wonder whether libraries are still relevant in the digital age, since so much information is available online for free. [6] However, not everyone has reliable internet access at home. [7] Libraries serve as an equalizer, providing internet and technology access to people who otherwise could not afford it. [8] This is especially important for job seekers, students, and small business owners.
[9] Libraries are also important for democracy. [10] They provide access to information without political or commercial bias. [11] Librarians are trained to help people find accurate, reliable sources. [12] In a time of widespread misinformation, this kind of guidance is more valuable than ever.
[13] For all these reasons, the community should vote yes on the library funding measure. [14] Libraries do a lot of good and deserve our support.
Questions in This Drill
- The writer wants to make the opening of the essay more compelling for an audience of community voters. Which revision of sentence 1 best accomplishes this goal?
- The writer wants to strengthen the transition between paragraph 2 and paragraph 3. Which sentence, if added at the beginning of paragraph 3, best accomplishes this goal?
- The writer wants to add a specific piece of evidence to support the claim in sentence 10 that libraries 'provide access to information without political or commercial bias.' Which addition best supports this claim?
- The writer wants to revise sentences 13 and 14 to create a stronger, more specific conclusion. Which revision best accomplishes this goal?
- A classmate suggests that the essay would be more persuasive if it acknowledged and responded to the strongest version of the opposing argument. Which addition best accomplishes this?