Drill 2 · English · Organization and Cohesion
ACT English: Organization and Cohesion (Drill 2) is a English practice drill covering Organization and Cohesion. It contains 5 original questions created by Brian Stewart, a Barron's test prep author with over 20 years of tutoring experience.
Organization and Cohesion questions ask you to reorder sentences, place new sentences logically, and choose transitions that improve paragraph flow. This drill focuses on sentence reordering within a paragraph, questions where you must identify the most logical sequence by tracking pronoun references, cause-effect relationships, and chronological markers.
Question 1. Which sequence creates the most logical cause-and-effect order?
Explanation: Choice C is correct. The root cause is the budget cuts (sentence 2). That triggers two intermediate effects: popular acts canceled (sentence 3) and local artists withdrew (sentence 4). The ultimate result of those withdrawals is the attendance drop (sentence 1). The sequence 2, 3, 4, 1 correctly places the cause first, then the two immediate reactions, then the final cumulative outcome. Choice A begins with the attendance drop before any cause is established. Choice B begins with the cancellations before the budget cuts that caused them. Choice D places the attendance drop second, before the artist withdrawals that contributed to it.
Question 2. Where should sentence 3 be placed for the best logical flow?
Explanation: Choice H is correct. The paragraph describes the training process leading to race day. Sentence 2 describes the active training component (increasing mileage). Sentence 3 adds the complementary rest component; it follows naturally as the other half of a training program, and the word "equally" in sentence 3 only makes sense relative to the training just described in sentence 2. Sentence 4 then shifts to race day as a natural conclusion. Choice F places recovery before any training is introduced. Choice G places recovery after only the opening general statement, before training runs are described. Choice J places training advice after the race.
Question 3. Where is the best place to insert this sentence?
Explanation: Choice C is correct. The new sentence sets the scene for the discovery; Fleming was in his London lab studying bacterial cultures. This context needs to come just before sentence 3, which describes the moment of discovery (the contaminated petri dish). Inserted after sentence 2, it bridges the historical context (sentences 1-2) to the narrative of the discovery itself (sentences 3-4), providing a smooth scene-setting transition. Choice A places it before sentence 1, but scene-setting is more effective just before the specific discovery moment. Choice B places it after only the opening sentence about penicillin's impact, before any historical context is given. Choice D places it at the very end after the investigation has begun, far too late.
Question 4. Where should the new paragraph about agricultural water-saving technologies be placed?
Explanation: Choice H is correct. The new paragraph is specifically about agricultural water-saving technologies. Paragraph 2 discusses agricultural water use, the new paragraph elaborates directly on solutions to that problem. Placing it immediately after paragraph 2 keeps the agricultural topic together, creating a logical problem then solution structure before the essay moves to industrial and municipal use in paragraph 3. Choice F places solutions before the problem is established. Choice G places agricultural technology solutions between the introduction and the agriculture problem paragraph, inverting the order. Choice J places it after the industrial and municipal use paragraph, at that point the essay has moved past agriculture.
Question 5. Where should sentence 1 be placed for the best logical flow?
Explanation: Choice A is correct. Sentence 1 is a broad evaluative claim that frames the entire paragraph; it tells the reader what the paragraph is going to demonstrate. Sentences 2, 3, and 4 provide the evidence (before/after contrast, production speed, rising literacy) that substantiates the claim. Moving sentence 1 anywhere else removes the framing that makes the paragraph's argument coherent. After sentence 2 (Choice B) puts the claim mid-paragraph after the historical contrast. After sentence 3 (Choice C) is too late to orient the reader. After sentence 4 (Choice D) turns a topic sentence into a concluding sentence, which fundamentally changes the paragraph's logic.